שיחה:אלון סברוני: הבדלים בין גרסאות בדף

The message, on this page, is slightly different from the message on the English page. In my opinion the wording needs to be edited in both languages

I suggest for English: "Alon Sivroni is an Israeli intactivist, who +promotes awareness to end all circumcisions (without medical indication) and the removal of foreskin from any healthy baby

 

instead of (engages in Intacthumanity.org to outlaw the medically not indicated) circumcision of boys." and replace the bad link to a circumcision page. similarly the idea should be identical for hebrew